I know I seem to make many people laugh at what I say. I do not always know what or why people laugh at certain things but don't laugh at all at some other things I think is funny or entertaining myself.
I was told by the comedy teacher and my class to stick to my character and persona of a guy who chases after women he can't get in real life who are sexy bikini models online, that my details for what I know or assume about these girls who I adore and worship is creepy and funny as the clueless guy who does not understand that they should not be my personal heros or my role model I look up to but just a piece of ass to hope to go to bed with the way all the other normal men view these women as bimbo air head sex objects, where I view them as leaders and pillars of the community.
I bombed in class when I went from self depricating humor of being shit all over by someone and directly insulted by some girl or person of power to going on the attack of trash talking the rude and shitty social skill nerds in the animation department on campus. I was told that when I went and pointed out how much someone was a loser and how much they sucked as weak people that no one thought it was funny and that my bikini model fantasyland lover boy material was much better and what I need to use. I was told that I still have good jokes, but negativity is not a direction I should go in. I was told that my punchlines make someone think I am going in a certain direction and then I take it to a surprise self deprecating humor where I am the butt of my jokes and that seems to work the best. I want to try my material that did work at all this time on more people to see what, why, where, and how I failed as a funny comedian with my material that I liked but nobody else did???!!!
People in the comedy class tell me I have been the most consistent with having very funny material and jokes every time. I have got up and performed every time we did stand up in class, with new material every time I got up in front of everyone.
Some of the disconnect for me seems to be that some of my humor or jokes is the real life truth and some of it is an exageration of the truth where I went through a shameful and humilating ordeal with some mean girl who I really liked, yet I am not sure with half of my stand up jokes why somethings people find so funny that they cannot breath from laughing so hard and some of my material they are silent as a church mouse or a deaf librarian who is introverted as a shy passive person. I want to run by my stuff with more people to fully figure out what works and get laughs and what doesn't work and gets a bored reaction from everyone.
Just like I don't know how to impress a bikini model into thinking that I am amazing and a great catch, I don't get fully what or why somethings I say seem to be very very funny to everyone and why some things I thought were going to get a big laugh everyone hated and wanted me done and was no longer paying attention to me, but now annoyed with me and wanting me just to stop!??
I need to rework the best of my old material from January to the present time of mid April into a 3 minute comedy stand up set.
A few people in class were being helpful of telling me or answering me what I had that was funny and what I had that just did not work and why. Everyone wants me to keep going with my belief in the internet bikini models as these women I adore and know so much details and random facts about ever though we are not real life face to face close friends. Just internet or convention aquanitances in a very formal way where I am a fan boy of their modeling and they are the person in charge of the affection admiration and attention from me or the thousands of other men chasing after them at the same time.
I hope I can be very funny on Thursday MAY 3rd, at Flappers Comedy Club in Downtown Burbank We will be performing at 10pm as a class with 3 minutes per person.
I was told by the comedy teacher and my class to stick to my character and persona of a guy who chases after women he can't get in real life who are sexy bikini models online, that my details for what I know or assume about these girls who I adore and worship is creepy and funny as the clueless guy who does not understand that they should not be my personal heros or my role model I look up to but just a piece of ass to hope to go to bed with the way all the other normal men view these women as bimbo air head sex objects, where I view them as leaders and pillars of the community.
I bombed in class when I went from self depricating humor of being shit all over by someone and directly insulted by some girl or person of power to going on the attack of trash talking the rude and shitty social skill nerds in the animation department on campus. I was told that when I went and pointed out how much someone was a loser and how much they sucked as weak people that no one thought it was funny and that my bikini model fantasyland lover boy material was much better and what I need to use. I was told that I still have good jokes, but negativity is not a direction I should go in. I was told that my punchlines make someone think I am going in a certain direction and then I take it to a surprise self deprecating humor where I am the butt of my jokes and that seems to work the best. I want to try my material that did work at all this time on more people to see what, why, where, and how I failed as a funny comedian with my material that I liked but nobody else did???!!!
People in the comedy class tell me I have been the most consistent with having very funny material and jokes every time. I have got up and performed every time we did stand up in class, with new material every time I got up in front of everyone.
Some of the disconnect for me seems to be that some of my humor or jokes is the real life truth and some of it is an exageration of the truth where I went through a shameful and humilating ordeal with some mean girl who I really liked, yet I am not sure with half of my stand up jokes why somethings people find so funny that they cannot breath from laughing so hard and some of my material they are silent as a church mouse or a deaf librarian who is introverted as a shy passive person. I want to run by my stuff with more people to fully figure out what works and get laughs and what doesn't work and gets a bored reaction from everyone.
Just like I don't know how to impress a bikini model into thinking that I am amazing and a great catch, I don't get fully what or why somethings I say seem to be very very funny to everyone and why some things I thought were going to get a big laugh everyone hated and wanted me done and was no longer paying attention to me, but now annoyed with me and wanting me just to stop!??
I need to rework the best of my old material from January to the present time of mid April into a 3 minute comedy stand up set.
A few people in class were being helpful of telling me or answering me what I had that was funny and what I had that just did not work and why. Everyone wants me to keep going with my belief in the internet bikini models as these women I adore and know so much details and random facts about ever though we are not real life face to face close friends. Just internet or convention aquanitances in a very formal way where I am a fan boy of their modeling and they are the person in charge of the affection admiration and attention from me or the thousands of other men chasing after them at the same time.
I hope I can be very funny on Thursday MAY 3rd, at Flappers Comedy Club in Downtown Burbank We will be performing at 10pm as a class with 3 minutes per person.